Friday, 12 June 2015

This Is Dooms Day




Learning Reflection
I am learning to write a recount about ANZAC landings.
I am so proud of being able to complete my work and write a recount.
It can be tricky to write a recount far away in the past tense.
Who can help me is a teacher or a buddy.
The next step for me is to write a longer recount and also with punctuation.

1 comment:

Anonymous said...

You have put a lot of effort into writing your ANZAC Recount. I am impressed with how you have sequenced your recount and added details to allow the reader to visualise what is going on.